Sir, that is one sick bass drop. Don't listen to the cowards who say things like "don't make the bass so heavy" or "my ears are bleeding"
That is epic. Get that finished.
Probably the best drop I've heard on the site.
My ears are bleeding...
Sir, that is one sick bass drop. Don't listen to the cowards who say things like "don't make the bass so heavy" or "my ears are bleeding"
That is epic. Get that finished.
Probably the best drop I've heard on the site.
My ears are bleeding...
The single chord was nice, but I believe a more minor sounding chord would have suited the drum part better. The drums were really cool, but the opening could have gotten to into a more constant beat sooner. While it was almost overly simple, it was not hurt because of that.
Good job.
Awesome thanks so much, yeah I need to definitely work on my structure of tune progression! Thanks for the honesty and I'll try harder next time!
I hope the vocals were the way you intended to them to be.
The music was so nice, and then the singing started
If you weren't intending to sound like that, you could get some singing lessons, the main problem is that you do not have enough breath support. You need to breath more, and focus on singing in tune.
If the singing was intended to sound like this, I found it very funny, so I won't rate it as I would rate a more serious submission. You didn't sound like Nat King Cole, but that probably wasn't your intent.
Merry Christmas.
My ears are bleeding.
Good, if anything related to this tragedy can be good.
Catchy hook, but got a bit repetitive.
You did a nice job of layering stuff to make it a bit less repetitive.
The vocals were great and creepy, and the lyrics had a great message
I agree, what right is the right.
Thanks man!
Thats really impressive for garageband
nice
Well know one knows about the loops and what you can do.
don't do too many remixes, you can do better
if you do do remixes, don't just layer stuff over the original song
had a nice beat, good instruments
i'm still trying to figure out how to actualy make a re-mixes the right way i cant find good software to do so mabe you can give me a hint on what i can use?
the break in the middle was really weird, the song just stopped.
the voices had a almost had bit too much pitch bending in them
needed more bass
I couldn't agree more. I just sorta had fun making it, did it in a rush. Took about 30 mins max haha. Thanks for the review!
~X
Epic.
slender+hollwood
the ending could have been better, instead of a fade out a last hit of the inception horn thing
Thanks! and yeah I see your point. tbh I wasn't sure on how to go about the ending since I accomplished all I wanted in the first half. I figured my best bet was to do the trailer music route and fade out with a final horn. You know where it would normally fade to the title then licenses/sponsers n stuff.
Nice, but it seems unfinished
The drum beat was great
seemed like it went somewhere
perhaps a more appropriate genre would be trance or dance,
but genres are impossible to define
In a way it is unfinished because I'm thinking of extending it.
I guess I'll move it to trance then. Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Sick.
Should get more plays.
I'm glad you like it! And I agree, it should get more plays. haha!
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